Little feature of me
hello, my
name is nicolás, I am 19 yeas old, but my birthday in not too far, is in the sixteen
of July, buy for the pandemic I don’t think I celebrate.
I live in the
Santiago of Chile, born in this city, and life my enter life in this city (and
in the same house). For this I do not know how is a change of house, but this
house is a good house the only problem have is the neighbourhood not have a good
connection with public transport, but in pandemic this not have a lot importance.
I don’t have
to much to teel about me, I like to have a play videogame, but principal a simulation-strategic
videogame, never is a bat moment to trait to dominate the world (¿insert evil laughter?)
For my family,
don have much to teel abut, is the typical not functional family. I have one sister,
four year more old that me, and my fathers is married (maybe is better not more)
this is a little feature of me.


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